New Scene Outline.

New Scene Outline: This is our new scene outline that we came up with after we had our meeting with Matt and Luke and gave them our pitch. We were mostly green lit but we just had to tweak a few things, here is our result - 

• Slowly introduced to our male psycho killer
  • Show shots of his eyes, his hands, etc. to create tension

• Slow build up of shots that increase in importance
  • As we go along we see the parts of the paintbrush, blood palette, etc.
• We then see the body
  • The body is no longer suspended from the wall or a slab
    • Body is now seated on a chair or lying on the floor, bloody and dying/dead.
  • We see a scalpel lying somewhere, alon
    gside knives and other weapons.
• In the end, the killer is shown manically smiling
  • Obviously happy, shaking, sweat dripping down his head, and the canvas full of blood is shown.