Feedback from our Pitch.

Feedback – Blank Canvas Pitch

This is the feedback we got regarding our pitch on Friday, the 4th of December, including the rehearsal shoot.

• Nice camera angles.
• Difficult to show a cut up body, however what if the painting was drawn in blood from the body on a canvas – people wouldn't expect that.
  • Using the body to create the painting/sculpture – using the vicitim as material than rather cutting it up.
• Torture.
• Using a guy is a better idea (as the victim) as it isn't stereotypical.
• Location: Depends – if you want a studio, you can use the art room instead of just using the studio.
• Don't do the hallway thing, keep it in one location.